This is really good material, makes sense (most rappers rap crazy verses with no sense at all). The level of deepness feels good to hear. Faving this. 5/5 10/10
Thx fam! =) Yea it was a Pretty big Different approach to this subject. I wanted to go the opposite direction than the usual rappers go. Heres a story not about hoes,money,clubs. its about Being trapped, male and female alike. Females get trapped by the guy pretending to be "that guy" and they skip out once they get her. but the guy is also trapped because he's a goon for a reason. he was hurt to the point he didnt care about feelings anymore so hes trapped being the guy who traps the female. =( kinda fucked up. but it was fun to write about. =) Stay up.
You signed? No? Go get signed man. GO.
Great work here man. I can't even describe this piece of work.
I loved this
But you don't care! D:
Or so says the author comments.
Anyways, this is dope. Good job.
You sound a bit stuck at times, but ignoring that the flow is amazing. Faving this. Keep it up.
hey thanks man!
I Do Have Something To Say
This is epic and inspirational. I love the piano. Really good work here man.
I Thank you :D if I can Inspire anyone off of what I do then I have already Won
The kick to me doesn't feel deep and/or strong enough. And the clap sounds way too factory, meaning the clap is too simple. But I'm loving the semi-epic melody you have there. The peaks are great as well. Keep at it man.
See, that's what I thought. I was tweaking with it before to make it more real, instead of how you've described it. If you wouldn't mind helping me fix it, I could find a way to fix it. I use FL9, and I'm currently re-learning how to use it to make better, realer loops and songs.
This is amazing!
I love the techno-styled intro, then crashes into hardcore modern hiphop. Great work Joey Keys!
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